literature

I Dreamt

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I dreamt of you last night
But you didn't turn me away.
No.
You pulled me into your arms
And promised you'd never let go.
My dad liked you
Which is why I knew it was a dream.
Your eyes locked with mine
And for a moment, we were perfect.
And then my eyes opened.
I searched for a sign
That you had been here.
Your smell
Was stuck in my nose.
Your touch
Was all over my skin.
I cried all that morning
Because I knew you were there
In my heart.
Or did I only dream your taste,
Imagine your touch,
Beg for the smell of your skin?
I dreamt it all.
Justin. Why do you haunt me so? You say you never meant to hurt me, but that is all you did. I'm such a fraile soul. I wish I could find another like you. You were perfect, the way your hands fit in mine, the way your lips felt with mine... Justin. I miss you.
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EmoLove-4ever's avatar
i understand... i'm in the same exact place of hurting and wanting and breaking. maybe not your exact situation, but i know what the aftertaste feels like.. he broke up with me and broke my heart 2 months ago... and i still dream about him. and i still wake up and wish he was next to me. and i still feel his touch and want it, and taste his lips and want it. i miss him so much. but he doesnt realize the hurt hes put me through.. which makes it worse.
:tighthug: i'm so sorry you had this happen..... i'm always here if you ever need someone to talk to. note me, or email me. i'm here for you, hun.

you did an amazing job on this. the way it flows just makes me smile.. i love reading poetry. the ending line, to me, in most poems, is the most important part. it summarizes what we write, and it cuts it off at the right words. in another way of putting it, i think you did amazing. keep it up :hug: